Chapter 7 and 6 Combined
by Bethany Shedrick
Sigh. I can't. I can't. I can't do anything about this. I can't be embroiled in this situation. What piggy says is right, things are going to get really ugly and if we do anything to stop it. Jack is slowly gaining power and we all know it. Sigh. All I an do is the right things; set things straight here. And the dear littluns. Oh, they don't have a clue of whats going on. All they know is to follow who seems to be leader.
And so, to give some respect to Ralph, for being such a responsible leader, I started diffidently slacking back. Allowing Ralph to have some alone time. It's really what he needs. Being a leader and all, it means talking time off and just getting away to concentrate on the issues and then later, turn them into solutions.
The other day, Jack and Ralph actually got along for a change. But not utterly. But on the surface of kindness. They both looked for the beasty, no critical tension in that, but found no beast. I think it was a lie what Samneric said about seeing a beasty. A furry beasty with wings. Come on! They probably just had a bad nightmare. That's all. And now because of there imagination it sent the whole pack of mutinously crazed kids wild.
And now, every know and then I fill my self not knowing which one to follow. Ralph is a good leader, but her doesn't have the courage to stand up to Jack. And Jack is strong and can hunt, but he is not a good leader and if he was chosen to be, we all, even Ralph and especially Piggy would be tortured. And so, I think I am better off independent. Doing the right things, helping with the kids ans so on. Sigh. Living the life of a dun sky, the platforms near the water overed in brine like icing on a cake, and the grassed heaved in coarse moors.
If only we could be rescued...
Tuesday, September 23, 2008
blog 5
Posted by bethany s. at 7:09 PM
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4 comments:
well you did great with discriptions but i couldnt tell who this was! it was a very good way to put yourself into the story but it was mostly talking about the diolouge and i feel that you could've taken the time to discribe. i was wondering if you were rushed or tired because you had this misstake, "And now, every know and then". but you did the vocab but next time could you hilight them so i could find them next time? thanks
You did a great job I love the way you writ, but your blog is a little confusing. Next time highlight your vovab words, becasue I couldn't fin them. All in all you did a realy good job.
Hey Bethany,
I love your blog, your description is very good, and I love when you said "every know and then I fill my self not knowing which one to follow. Ralph is a good leader, but her doesn't have the courage to stand up to Jack. And Jack is strong and can hunt, but he is not a good leader and if he was chosen to be, we all, even Ralph and especially Piggy would be tortured." I liked how you showed that he was confused on who to go with. Sometimes I felt that you just rushed through it, and I couldn't tell who the character you were writing about was. You should probably highlight you vocab words a different color because I couldn't see them. In all your blog was pretty good.
HAILEIGH SMITH
Hey Bethany,
Where are your other blog? I would like to comment on your other blog posts, but I can't if you dont have one made. Comon Bethany, you can do it.
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